by gimmie_your_load
Have you no shame? This story is vulgar, crude, and, quite frankly, it sucks. Seriously, great writing, as usual, and I am delighted you have returned... now you've tempted me to take our favorite fellatrix on another fan fiction adventure. I wonder what kind of kinky trouble I could get her into...
I could really do without all the writing about the bad smells.
I bailed out when she was first on her knees.
Your prose is excellent. I love hearing it from a real girl’s perspective. Got me hard as hell. Going to enjoy reading more of your work. By the way miss, you have a very hot smile yourself.
Loved it, there is NOTHING hotter then a submissive cocksucker. Especially one with big tits.