All Comments on 'Holiday Foursome Fun Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WOW!!

All I can say is WOW!!!! I just got off just from reading both parts of this story!! It was HOT! The best one I've read on here!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
hot

loved it the first part was very hot keep writing looking forword to your next work

N2outdoorsN2outdoorsover 13 years ago
Incredibly hot story!

Man, that is one awesome and hot story! It is even better with you saying it is true. I love your realistic descriptions of everyone. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. Thanks,

sosowettsosowettover 13 years ago
Bar stool?

I wish I had been sitting next to them on a bar stool, haha. Loved the story, big bunches! xoxo lacy

suelove58suelove58over 13 years ago
Terrific Writing

Wow! A wonderful description. Of course I was also trying to take in the story from Helen's point of view, imagining the sensations that she would have been feeling, three mouths on her at once and so exposed in a public place. Thrilling!

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