All Comments on 'Holiday Switch'

How could they look into each other's eyes and not see that it was the brother or sister?

the characters were described in such a way that it was easy to fall into and put myself in the middle of the entire story. this author is good..........very good!

How can she slip into bed in just her panties, and then later he take her pants off?

Love the conflicted arousal. Keep up the great work!

There were some inconsistancies but nothing a good editing can't fix. More please.

I really enjoyed this! The giving in to the passion the raw hot passion that drives them--great story, certainly aroused me!

the story was good but as usual it seems no one on this site can finish a story if you can't finish then don;t bother starting show some respect for the readers