All Comments on 'Holidays are for Taking Risks'

by randydaughterreborn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Almost came in my pants! Outstanding. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Perfect …. I have a desire for my 18 yr old step daughter as well

jimmcdonald609jimmcdonald609about 6 years ago
Talent

You have a knack for writing erotic stories.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
hey there

you are not a bad writer...add some more story before sex...other than that, no complaints from me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome story

Keep on writing. That was great for a first story. Can't wait to see more from uou

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(RETIRED FROM WRITING AS OF MAY 2018) Australian author. Early 30s. Feminist. Not single, so don't hit on me. But please do tell me if you enjoyed my stories, or not - I am open to *constructive* criticism. I try to have realistic characters in my stories - well, as realisti...