All Comments on 'Holidays with Stepdad'

I ave been trying to find u Ashely but have had no luck

This is hilarious you are tagging it erotica for women.

Too damn short. Just started to get horny.

Dear Anonymous, thank you for your feedback. This story is tagged as "erotica for women" because, like all the stories I write, it focuses primarily on the sensations of a female protagonist. While it is meant to be enjoyed by all genders, I write the type of stories that I, as a woman, enjoy reading - stories that reflect the female experience of sexuality.

That said, I am sure many women will not enjoy my stories, and I am always happy to receive feedback from those too. All the best, and thank you for reading.

If she was lying naked in the bed, how did, "She squeezed her tights together?"

take her soon

This story obviously didnt have any proof reading and there wasnt enough to be much of an erotica

Couldn’t take it seriously because it was so short and literally just said “boobie” in it. I don’t think I’ve ever read that in erotica before. Literally laughed out loud.

As a woman this story was awful. I've gotten more aroused looking at a woman's fitness magazine. Im guessing 18 is your age. PLEASE grow up and experience life before you inflict more silliness like this on readers?

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ButterflyGal