All Comments on 'Holly: My Girlfriend's Daughter Ch. 04'

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MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Really Hot

Having just read chapters 1-4 , I must day this series is hot. There are a few things I find disgusting but this isn't my story. I'm not so sure that I believe it's true, but it could be. I'll be watching for the next hot chapter, just don't make me wait to long.

bffsebffseover 13 years ago
Extremely Hot

Wow, I just read all four chapters and cum twice! Keep going!

PaulScottBarbarasSonPaulScottBarbarasSonover 13 years ago
Mom's little sexpot daughter does her!

I love stories in which a daughter seduces her mom. Holly involving her girl friend Megan in mom Elise's seduction made it more plausible. And it would absolutely fuckliscious to be, like the boy friend, the only guy privy to these goings on. But the piss stuff is not my thing. One yuck in an otherwise hot story. Dunno where you can go from here unless inspired Megan, with the help of Elise and Holly, goes after her own mom. Hey! There's an idea!

bigd44xbigd44xover 13 years ago
Great story!

I just read all 4 chapters of this story. It was great, I love mother/daughter incest stories! I hope there will be more to this story in the future, just not to far into the future...lol

Cherri_TartCherri_Tartabout 13 years ago

omg, you are torturing me! LOL - please please please, can we see another chapter soon? :)

LyndaCurtisLyndaCurtisalmost 13 years ago
More please....

Please continue the story...

Mayhem296Mayhem296over 12 years ago
MORE

more please... this story is HOT so far

Mayhem

candymamacandymamaover 12 years ago
keep goin

omg finish plaese do

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
The writing was so good

that I could suspend disbelief about the improbability of it all. I was there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome story!

Please tell us more. Does Megan stay with Holly? Does Megan continue to be involved as the fourth to the group keeping it a foursome?

unicorn64unicorn64almost 11 years ago

This is definately a different kind of story. Eric is one heck of a guy to be able to handle three women at once.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WHEW! What a read. So, when do we get to peek inside the weekend and

follow this incredible saga

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 10 years ago
Just let me give you my opinion.

This is one of the hottest, most sexy, DIRTIEST story I have read on Literotica that also has love and romance. WOW! I favor mother/son incest but mother/daughter, especially in this case, ranks right up there. Thank you for writing marvin_gardens. I will look to see if you have other stories.

arch3rarch3rover 9 years ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ok so where is chapter 5???

One of the best stories i have read. Write chapter 5!! Please

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