All Comments on 'Holly Rollin' Pt. 01'

What was the hurry? You obviously plan on continuing this with more chapters, so why only a brief entry this time?

I don't know about this one. I guess banging your granny does make it incest, but it could have just as easily gone in non-erotic.

I thought it was quite good. I liked the wrinkle about sex being a manifestation of the divine. Nice thought. Now that's a religion I can get behind. Probably was always so before the sin guys took over.

Thanks for this fun story, it gave me a laugh and a boner, albeit modest. Keep up the good work!

The writing seemed rushed, but not too bad.

Who is Holly? Or did you mean holy?

The heading of Holly Rollin' Pt. 01 implies that there'll be a sequel forthcoming, right?

If there is, maybe the religious grandmother and the military minded grandson will end up with him up her ass like her religious beliefs were shoved down his throat?

Part 2 would be appreciated . Like the story. AAAA++++

Haha! Nobody ever preached on their back to me.

There has to be---MORE---