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Anonymousabout 9 years agoomg
The story starts off being told by her. A few paragraphs in it changes to him. I hate that it practically ruins it for me as I have to stop and re-read to make sure it wasn't just me.
emrldtricaabout 9 years agoNeeds
Needs editing. Okay story. Misspelling, narrator is not clear, and gramatical errors make story hard to read.
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