All Comments on 'Home Early'

Really enjoyed the story. Descriptive writing brought me right there as she ignored you while she worked, then ambushed you in the studio. NIce emotion as well. Hope that story is based on actual events. Keep writing. Nicely done.

Thanks for sharing. Happy writing. :)

Its the type you can play along to as you read the dialogue!

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I cannot believe how wet I am right now. You brought me into the story. I have someone I want to play Melanie.

all i can say is wow