All Comments on 'Home Early'

all i can say is wow

I cannot believe how wet I am right now. You brought me into the story. I have someone I want to play Melanie.

Its the type you can play along to as you read the dialogue!

xUFx

Thanks for sharing. Happy writing. :)

Really enjoyed the story. Descriptive writing brought me right there as she ignored you while she worked, then ambushed you in the studio. NIce emotion as well. Hope that story is based on actual events. Keep writing. Nicely done.