All Comments on 'Home For The Holidaze'

your imagination is working overtime...the story is too unbelievable for words

Loved it......ignore these criticsThis happens more often than people care to admit....Dad is my best partner!

No, don't ignore the critics. They are trying to tell you something. I welcome you to the society of Literotica-posted authors. But you need to do more work. Check out the volunteer editors.

Thanx for your efforts.

A dictionary is a useful tool. "explicatives" doesn't exist! Try "expletives"!

If you think you can have anal with an "anal virgin" that easily, you're a fool.

reads like something a pediphile would like, bet the guy looks cute in her thong tho! you need help with sentence structure buddy. Don't give up!