All Comments on 'Home Invaders Ch. 05'

by wimpywelshwilly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WTF

You've posted prior chapters in noncon and incest. Both are appropriate choices. What in the ever loving hell made you think this was a bdsm chapter? It isn't. You would do well to ask the moderators to move it. Incest, probably, as the mothers' knowing participation out ranks the nauseating noncon treatment of the fathers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

badly written storyin the wrong category. i donot care if it is fiction the fathers did not deserve that much disrespect. the whole thing was just to much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You need to see a shrink

Seriously it was taboo before but now you are 2 murder short of a full ouidapus story, I have never seen issues come through so clearly in a piece of writing. Get help seriously. I mean it... Seriously you, help, get...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It was great

I loved it every minute of it. The plot was great the fathers abuse, humiliation was amazing. Honesty I thought it was justified they should treat their wives better in bed.

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