by Alluring_Crimson_Shifter
It is a shame. I'd have loved to spend more time reading much more details about each violation to Jorge, Julie and, of course, Gabriela. Too quick.
This is all very rushed and unfortunately comes across as very clinical, a bit like reading a shopping list. No offence intended but it made me wonder if English is your first language. There is lots of potential for erotic stories in this one chapter .
Tess (uk)