- Incest/Taboo
- Home Shopping Ch. 02
- Comments
All Comments on 'Home Shopping Ch. 02'
by sunburycd
- 72 Comments
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoGreat read. Hopefully Corey gets to fuck his sister and both Dolores and Gayle.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThis should go on. So many options. Where has the sister been? With Daddy maybe.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI didnt think that it will turn into Threesomes/Foursomes, it was good in a "HOT STORY" kinda way that being said, i would like to see the "Dad" getting involved, Well if you can make it happen i would live that.
krakbaknsak58almost 6 years agoIt appears that Corey has become the centre of attention. I hope this is but a beginning for bigger things to come.
I also hope that Grandma wants her piece of the action with Corey. His sister should succumb to her parents, before anything happens with Corey. As for the receptionist, in for penny, in for a pound. A happy workplace is a good workplace.
Eric_Shiftalmost 6 years agoI think this has much more life in it. I'd love more.
Dallashdraceralmost 6 years agoHe needs to hook up with the others while mom watches. I am sure the sister liked what she saw and will want some as well.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agofantastic addition. you cleaned up the big hanger nicely. cant wait for more. im hopping dad stays with grandma and corey has fun with the rest.
HaydenDLinderalmost 6 years agoI actually liked this one better than the first.
You definitely need to continue this.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI was disappointed with the mother son sex scene. From the way you left the first chapter hanging like that and had us all hot and bothered. I thought it would be hot with a lot of detail to it. But instead it turned out to be a flop on that part. The rest was just okay. So I give it 3 stars.
happymuffinalmost 6 years agoThis was a perfect second part.
Whiteout a doubt, I love how all the Milfs and Gilfs are behaving and that now his Sister is in the Picture Nice.
I just hope we get some Grandmother and Grandson action but without Dad.
5 Start and please keep up the good work!
goducks1almost 6 years agostory was a great continuation - although i can't wait for chapter 3. You're right - chapter 1 was unbelievable - but this was well-written and VERY sexy as well. 5 stars yet again!!!
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoOh my god this is so hot. Please give us chapter 3....and 4...5...6
akeyesxalmost 6 years agoBut I'm anxious as anyone else to see what you do with it.
librertinalmost 6 years agoYou started well now just be careful how you interweave the affairs as you have a hit in your hands
Hose4me2almost 6 years agoYou must be a good brother and fuck your sister! Possible title, "Home Fucking"!
Great story, keep it going.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI wanna see Theresa in lots of skimpy bikinis and lacy underwear in Chapter 3 and beyond just like her sexilicious mom.
happydutchguyalmost 6 years agoI was hoping you'd let the sister make an appearance. Well done, 5 stars, again!
Welikeu69almost 6 years agoThis series was done very well. It was innocent and exciting and painted a picture of everything in my head perfectly. Defiantly one of the best if not the very best story/ series I've read. I hope you would continue this serious, bravo.
RontheSwansonalmost 6 years agoYou should not have had the dad involved AT ALL. just makes it worse just make it like a harem leave the dad out
meme165over 5 years agoPlease lets us know you are working on chapter 3, and when it will be submitted
levoyeur2over 5 years agoExcellent story and excellent chapter two. You didn’t fuck it up at all. I look forward to future chapters. Lots of possibilities plot wise. Some have been done before but don’t let that stop you. You’re a great writer and I’m sure whatever plots you pursue will be excellent. Looking forward to all the possibilities: sister brother, sister dad, Corey grandma, foursome etc. I really liked adding in Gayle to the mix, didn’t see that coming. I look forward to reading all your other stories.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoAwaiting the next chapter with sister having arrived on the scene
WAA
Anonymousabout 5 years agoTwo great stories! Please don't stop there. I agree, would be fun to add the sister to the mix. And to find out how Corey gets along with his mom and the other two women at the studio. You already teased a threesome between mom, son and the other woman. There are lots of possibilities.
I can understand if you'd rather move on to a new story but the first two chapters are excellent foundation for more fun. Thanks for writing great stories for us to enjoy!
I'm a Lit user but don't recall my log in so I'm posting as anonymous.
Nylonsrthebest66over 4 years agoA great story an well written. Would love to hear if the sister joins in
with her brother an mother. As one of the readers has mentioned there are a lot of possibilities, which one will you go with???
ghostless9pmover 4 years agoI hope you close this one out. I really like the characters and the twist at the end.
MistressMissy08over 4 years agoI thought you did a really wonderful job on both chapters. I enjoyed your writing style. Especially that it wasn't raunchy. Thank you for your time and talent. The story is good left as is but I can say that I would read more if you chose to continue the plotline.
blackknight314over 4 years ago... but you can't leave us hanging about sister and Dad along with Mom and son. Or can you?
Anonymousover 4 years agoAnother riveting chapter. It would be a damn shame to leave it there! More please
Sex4lf57over 4 years agoEven though it's been a year and a half since chapter two was published, since you are still writing, there's still hope that you'll post a chapter three! Five stars and a favorite point!
HotForLitover 4 years agoVery hot!
Love how you write, would have loved to continue my session with another chapter 😉
ROCKY70over 4 years agoThis is no longer a job for COREY, it's an adventure
of a life time,he's is not just fucking MOM(the model)
he's also doing DELORES(the boss),and also GAYLE
(the old model),nowTHERESA(his sister) shows up.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWhat a fantastic chapter! Way to bury the hook for Ch 3 with the arrival of his sister!
FoggyKernelover 4 years agoYou do have a wonderful way with Mother/Son incest stories. I do hope you plan to continue to add this this story.
Jackpsmithyover 3 years agoThese two stories were amazing I hope you do another one
cursrahabout 3 years agoI know it's probably too late but I would really like to read more of this story'
Sex4lf57about 3 years agoAs you just submitted a new story, you're obviously still publishing. As such, can you please consider writing the third chapter to this story? It really is an awesome story and I'm dying to find out what happens next.
linnearalmost 3 years agoHell of a follow up. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoparty popper. stupid as usual theme. i mean the thrill u get cuckolding your dad is lost the moment the father talked about his mom(grandma) and his(dad) relationship. Your Nepotism story was FAR FAR better than this stupid ,lack of imagination , rubbish HOME SHOPPING PART 2. HERE ONE COME TO GET THRILL OF FENTASY NOT COMICS OF CHILD. 1STAR FOR ME
GeorgeGaleabout 2 years agoOutstanding, could not have imagined a better follow-up to the pervious stories...........():\
jcus0511over 1 year agoPretty good effort with this chapter following the brilliant effort of the first instalment. There was a lull in pace at the beginning of this chapter & some story setting that became slow & less interesting however, all was saved by a masterly finish. Well done the heat came back & my dreams were restored.
Anonymous9 months agoThis isn't as good for me as the first one.
It went from a heated and irresistible attracted between mom and son, to some kind of preplanned weirdo family ritual. Went from mom getting caught up in the moment, to "We're an incest family, going back 2 generations, so I guess it's time to indoctrinate our son too". Sigh, cue the hillbilly orgy music. I'm out.
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