All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 01 Ch. 13'

I'm glad you've begun to push your story arc. You seemed to have stalled out for a bit at giantism but now you have begun to progress the characters to a new political crisis. Keep it moving!

I apologize for the lull. The next three chapters, which are the last three chapters of Part One, should be more to your satisfaction. At least, I certainly hope so. :)

WOW!! Wild story or what?

Wild in a good way, I hope? :)

Tara is still very much a mystery of where she was and what did she do to have her mother banish her.

Did she devour her husband?

Frank still needs allies to help him to keep Brie from doing him harm.

It's still a very interesting story, erotic plus spooky.

Thanks for the read.

Thanks as always for the feedback, DigDaddy.

Yes, Tara did Devour her husband. I intentionally left some things about her past mysterious, but that was meant to be clear.

You are right that Frank is starting to realize just how outmatched he is.

Thanks again.

Best,

JD