All Comments on 'Hope on a Dream'

The tense change bothered me but the story is a winner. As far as where she learned what "around the world" means, I've known since I was twelve and that's a looooooong time ago. Nah, she didn't need to cheat to find it out, just ask a girlfriend!

Of course she could have learned the terminlogy even the instructions by word of mouth (...) BUT in that case, wouldn't she say that? No answer IS an answer, and avoidance would sure come to haunt them. At least it's pointing to SOME problem which needs to be addressed. Nice read and attention to details (both physical and the dynamics)

This story was so weak I couldnt even get off...Cant you do better than this...Poor at best

This was so weak I dont know where to begin. It didnt even get me off. It was poor at best.

I am happy I found this story from last Weekend. I must say you do a great job of writing and your story plot line was so well done. I love the end with “How do you know about Around-the-World,” is left hanging. "It's been so long since we've had sex. Can it wait?" It was just great she didn’t refuse to tell, she just wanted to enjoy her lusty man and the passion.<P>I am sorry more of the LW readers obviously missed your story as it is well done and would cause all kinds of discussion and comments. Thank you for the entertainment and all your efforts<P>PT

I didn't give this 100 because you could have done better with the changing of POV's, but this story was nice.

It is obvious the wife cheated, but the husband in a sorta way cheated also because he would gladly spent his time masturbating and going online than having sex with his wife. I would believe this is like an unspoken reconciliation story.

Cheers!

Good story but you left us hanging... ;)

As has been mentioned, the random POV changes were distracting. Generally good story as far as it goes, but it's definitely not the end.

Those darkies are just stupid animals, good for nothing else but to lick their white Masters ass!!

Keep your IR/Gay fantasies to your self comment-boy, we don't want to know about your homo-erotic jungle fever dreams, sheesh. Stay in the closet little comment-boy.

Impossible to read. I couldn't tell who was talking, or thinking, or doing whatever. Ultimately, I didn't care.