All Comments on 'Hope's in Charge'

I really didn't care for this one very much. Your stories are usually so good and I most always enjoy them but this one didn't even seem to be penned by you.

Thank you for writing and posting here. I'm sure I will like your next one better.

Thank you for your feedback. I wrote the entire story in about half an hour. Perhaps it was more of a "laundry list" of things that doms do to subs that sort of thing. But I appreciate your criticism. Thanks