All Comments on 'Horror and Fucking in the Mansion Ch. 04'

You advanced the story very well. Can't wait for more like this. Thank you Maria!

This is a good story, but it's very easy to get lost. There's basically no visual separation between what Gina and Diana are doing and what Tony and Fred are doing. So when the story suddenly shifts between the two, it feels like whiplash.

Have you considered adding visual separators, like a few dashes, to indicate a setting shift? It would make reading this a lot better.

That's it? You're leaving us hanging?!? NnOoOo say it ain't so!!! This story was very good, well written and titillating!! It needs a conclusion, if only another page on chp.4 showing that Fred rescued the girls before Tony torched the house!! I know this submission is nearly two years old and that it's very unlikely to be finished ~ damn me if the best writers just love to leave readers hanging!!!

Wow, I fucking love it. The thought of women stretched like that is so fucking horny. I’d have appreciated the guys getting caught and dragged in by the queer ghosts in the attic, to suffer similar extreme dilations from cocks and arms.

I spunked hard when I read of Dana’s knickers being ripped off, and again when Gina had two arms in her ass. Top stuff.

Is that all? Are you one of those cock-tease authors who leave you with an unfinished story and your cock in your hand without relief. Come on, Maria, this can't be the end. What happens? Do they burn down the house? What happens to the girls inside? Are they rescued? And what does the ghost (ghosts) do after the house is burned?