All Comments on 'Horror on the Beach Ch. 01'

Loved the original postings. this updated work is even better. looking forward to the updated Ch.2 release. and maybe a chapter 3 this time around?

Thank you for your appreciation! The revised edition of chapter 2 will be up shortly. I think you will enjoy it. Hentaikitten is writing chapter 3 right now. But it will take a couple of weeks still. We're trying to make the best of the story.

the title should have been "The Real Ocean Man"

Great story. In fact one of the best on here. Please don't abandon it :(

The kind of story I love. You should have had him fuck her though.

Any news on the progress of chapter 3? I’ve read the first two chapters many times and keep hoping for more. I saw your message on the profile page but that was so long ago. I hope you’re still writing.

my god. i can only imagine how bad it was before whoever fixed it. the scenes dragged out foreverrrrrrrr.

Its 2024

Dear author, we/I am so into this story that im horrified to think that its just stop in chapter 3... Please have mercy, proceed to follow up this story.

❤️Patiently waiting