All Comments on 'Hot Donna Ch. 05'

Great story but not much action in this piece, love the dialogue between Donna and Rob but like the descriptions of her outfits and how she teases the best

And he is now a fully fledged cuckold asshole. The really pathetic thing is the writer has made him a willing cuckold asshole and he has a total and utter whore for a wife. Good luck to them both. They deserve each other. A whore/slut/bitch and cuckold asshole. The husband better get those lips ready for all those creampies he will be eating. In chapter 6 can they both die of aids? that would be a fitting end to this story.

He gives her a gift to wear with the idea that she is provocative, a tease and exciting, thinking that her wearing it will make the two of them more aroused and compliment her for her new character. It will also advertise her as a cock teaser. He made no mention of actually fucking anyone but clever girl did include it in her question of his desires and he agreed...so - let's get to it.

We know she is already there in her mind, she just needed a few days to adjust her new thinking - right?

Chapter 6, a stranger at the bar and maybe Todd at the market the next day? You know she likes it and is going to get very active.

Iv'e been reading this story from the beginning and can't wait for the next chapter.

The story is progressing very well. I hope that in a future chapter Donna will go on a date with Ben from Chapter 2 which would prove to be a very erotic encounter.

Keep up the good story telling.

This story is well written. It's good erotic fantasy and keeps me watching for the next chapter. Hope there is much more to come. Keep up the good work.

I loved the story and I hope to read more, and I hope this is going to where I think its going, getting Donna done, and I hope its public. Thanks keep up the good work, and don't listen to the jerks that leave bad comments and no names. Bernard

Whom writes his own anon comments !!

Nobody else would be this insane !

Whorewife and cuckold husband.