All Comments on 'Hot Shop'

But the ending was kind of tacked-on, rushed, and unsatisfying. It would actually have been better to leave off the final epilogue paragraph.

Very nice little story.

Thank you.

There is nothing wrong with the brief epilogue. This is not a story which should go on and on.

Everything has come together and an elegant ending tying it together was best.

Thanks a God! An beautiful story. Really romantic. I liked.

Only one thing, is a little short, but a good to read and lovely.

Great Job!

5* for you!

I found many things to be rather humorous; but, I realize that I am reading from the standpoint of an American "manager"! It makes very good sense to me from an employee relations and customer comfort - but also from the standpoint of the condition of the stock! And you added in most definite love story growing in the background! * * * * * !

of how to do it properly.

It's a damned good tale and well-told.

Thank you

Just a bit too pat, especially at the end. But nicely done none the less!

Nice story, but it could have been better if the ending wasn't so short.

Wonderful story.

Not exactly what I expected as reading it on Literotica, but i loved it very much.

The two Mohans: as if taken from real life. I'm sure you had two real people in mind when you wrote the story.

But I have to admit that the commentators who complain about the rushed ending have a point.