All Comments on 'Hotel Fuck Toy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved it from start to finish. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wonderful

Just wonderful, babygirls love this kind of story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yes!

That was thrilling! Can’t wait to read more of your work!

FlesFlesover 4 years ago
Wow

Impressive. Most arousing. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
🔥Hot

I understand the other comments based on the title (many of your titles don't do justice to your work). This story was very well written and very hot. Kitty makes a perfect sub. Like many of your stories the characters appear as real people. Well done.

Side note - you have a type of woman as your primary character in your stories. Lean, B-cup, tight ass, long legs, good cock sucker, and a squirter. Excellent. You really put the readers there to witness your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

No follow-up? I would have kept reading. Sooo good.

Josie

badgirlfan69badgirlfan69over 6 years ago
Hot!

What a hot story! I hope that there will be more to this story, like who is this guy? Maybe the next one will be her boss, a family member or a three some or a surprise gangbang?! Thanks for sharing your talent with us & can't wait for more!

abmarieabmariealmost 7 years ago
Better than expected!

This story was really good! I expected something less well written based on the description but I was pleasantly surprised!

cjaustincjaustinalmost 7 years ago
Thanks!

...for this hot story and its lovely main character. It dings one of my long-time fantasies.

clitlicker4uclitlicker4ualmost 7 years ago
Loved it

Can't wait for more.

Will she only be his personal fuck toy? Or will this become a 2nd income for her? Any chance of mixing in a little incest, by having her daddy as her Dom one night.

Can't wait to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Nice and hot. The writing made it easy to play along. I would have like a sentence or two to put context and connection between the official job and this after-hours work. How did this come to be? How did she get involved? Is she the only one or do many employees participate?

PirettePirettealmost 7 years ago
A Series?

LOVED IT!

Will we be seeing more of "Kitty"?

I surely hope so!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
nicely written

Better than I anticipated from the title.

SimplySilverSimplySilveralmost 7 years ago
Nicely done.

I was a bit skeptical by the title but gave it a what the hell look.... then re read it because this was smoking hot. You get in the subs head just right; teasing the reader with your mystery man and the uncertanty as well as the sensation adjectives. It could use a bit of.... well ..... nothing. I cant think of a thing which is rare. Your Dom is solid, your sub is open and willing; what else could we ask but for more writing of this quality. 5 stars

YarhoooYarhoooalmost 7 years ago
I was rock hard all the way through

good story, nice one to act out. Easy and good. My slutty wife will enjoy it also. Thanks

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