by HeyAll
I understand the other comments based on the title (many of your titles don't do justice to your work). This story was very well written and very hot. Kitty makes a perfect sub. Like many of your stories the characters appear as real people. Well done.
Side note - you have a type of woman as your primary character in your stories. Lean, B-cup, tight ass, long legs, good cock sucker, and a squirter. Excellent. You really put the readers there to witness your stories.
What a hot story! I hope that there will be more to this story, like who is this guy? Maybe the next one will be her boss, a family member or a three some or a surprise gangbang?! Thanks for sharing your talent with us & can't wait for more!
This story was really good! I expected something less well written based on the description but I was pleasantly surprised!
...for this hot story and its lovely main character. It dings one of my long-time fantasies.
Can't wait for more.
Will she only be his personal fuck toy? Or will this become a 2nd income for her? Any chance of mixing in a little incest, by having her daddy as her Dom one night.
Can't wait to see where this goes
Nice and hot. The writing made it easy to play along. I would have like a sentence or two to put context and connection between the official job and this after-hours work. How did this come to be? How did she get involved? Is she the only one or do many employees participate?
I was a bit skeptical by the title but gave it a what the hell look.... then re read it because this was smoking hot. You get in the subs head just right; teasing the reader with your mystery man and the uncertanty as well as the sensation adjectives. It could use a bit of.... well ..... nothing. I cant think of a thing which is rare. Your Dom is solid, your sub is open and willing; what else could we ask but for more writing of this quality. 5 stars
good story, nice one to act out. Easy and good. My slutty wife will enjoy it also. Thanks