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All Comments on 'Hotel Rendezvous'

by moonandstars1971

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

This point of view never works in a story, and its not romance, erotic couplings at best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
could be...

It's fun fiction. I believe first person works fine. Maybe it's a bit over the top, but aren't all our fantasys? Erotic couplings, sure, but that's to be expected really..

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more more more x baz:)

fuck thats hot keep em cummin beautiful x

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