All Comments on 'Hotel to Remember'

I really think you got the point acrossed about what you imagined doing, over and over and over and over. Spend less time on the imagination part and more time giving details on the point of the story. This had so much more potential for those into larger women.

Thanks for the comment. My fantasies are more about the build-up than being about page after page of the actual deed being done, so to speak. Sometimes, I like to let things build up in my mind and fantasize about them more than to write about them as if I were actually doing them right away. "I met a large woman, I fucked her ass right away..".. end of story.. .

-bc