All Comments on 'Hottest Day of the Year'

Did you intend the reader to imagine their names in the story? Lol! Don't pay any attention to the critics. Their comments are also quite short so I doubt they have the attention span to read a lengthy story anyway. That description of the overweight sister reminded me of one of my coworkers. I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing. Lol.

I just LOVE people who can't stand others having a different opinion. Ya like the story? Fine, say so. Ya don't like the story? Fine, say so. Period.

Hot sisters is a favorite of mine and this one, while short, does the job. "Incest babies?", well it is your story if you want to go that way. Enjoy and share again.

I only wish there was more :D

A few awkward lines, but overall a fairly good shorty.

The beginning of a very good story. Pacing is way too fast. Keep up the good work.

Many lads peep and jo to sis. Some sister's tease and like attention and knowing bro gets hard for her. There are several ways to enjoy situation.

but sweet

I was not expecting a story this short to be so good! I even enjoyed the fact that you kept the name of the main character blank so that the reader can put their own name in. I'd love to read more like this. The sister is my kind of girl: hot, hairy pussy, big tits, and horny as hell.