All Comments on 'House Sitting'

You start the story in past tense then add this:

"I loved the idea of having a beautiful house to myself this week."

By adding this week it turns into present tense. Why not write "all week"

Story was poor as well.

I am about to read chapter two...This Thumper_Harder has it together. I am guessing you shot your load before you got to the end of chapter one.

Thumper_harder

keep giving us more

Richard

would have been nice

I had a neighbor like this when my Dad was stationed on an Air Force Base in Oh. and oh yeah Mothers need loving also to show they are still loved ! You are doing a good job with your story though and please keep up the good work.

Yes you got a "5" so far and probably more to follow in the future.!***

Just make it real and believable and I will be a reading.!^^

To answer your question. No. They weren't as popular back then. ;) Unrealistic eh?

It could happen. In my dreams anyway.

Another unrealistic fantasy.

Liked the dialogue between them. It brings Sandra to life.

A bit fast, but so much fun!

Great start. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

When she's alone, and life is making her lonely she can have Steven go, "Downtown." Sandra's husband is probably doing his secretary, so she needs a little strange.

Good story, need more details, when eating her pussy. Tell us more about the week end. She may like anal sex also!!!

For the read.

So erotic. Every young man's dream!

I dare say it is a fantasy like most stories on here.

BUT...

House sitting and taking advantage, looking at the underwear & finding the naughty bits all sounds feesible, yes I've been there. So does getting caught, been there too but completely different to this.

I believe the rebound fuck too, been there a couple of times :)

Many people harbour fantasies about their neighbours and when something happens it all falls into place as you describe.

I like the ommission of too much detail, it adds to the mystique and leaves the door open to much more if you want to write it.

more description of her long legs, perkey breasts, 36D, blue eyes, natural blonde, slender waist, smells like honey suckle etc etc. Good read - looking for follow up???

Fantasy BS!!!