All Comments on 'Housewife Allie'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
the concept is intriguing...

but to have that many 'tags' employed there is far too little story telling here.

i hope you will flesh this out, take your time, develop the character, both 'home' and 'at work' (or play?)

good luck, keep posting

RA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome!

More please! And more ass to mouth, that's really hot

AmbulAmbul17 days ago

Totally disgusting to this reader, but at the same time incredibly hot. The author has a very perverted imagination and has put it into a very well written story. Allie is a character I would like to read more about.

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