by hollytbowl
Totally disgusting to this reader, but at the same time incredibly hot. The author has a very perverted imagination and has put it into a very well written story. Allie is a character I would like to read more about.
but to have that many 'tags' employed there is far too little story telling here.
i hope you will flesh this out, take your time, develop the character, both 'home' and 'at work' (or play?)
good luck, keep posting
RA