All Comments on 'Housework Incentives'

Isn't it a pity that we live in times when housework and domesticity have to be DISCIPLINED into women? We may rediscover a world where women are once again proud and happy to create good homes for their husbands.

Today's modern "independent" women don't merely leave messes, they ARE messes! Modern women STINK!

Would like more on this subject from you, a bit old-schooled where the woman does the housework. Extremely erotic

In reality, I hope my partner and I would share the housework, if we were both working. But that didn’t make such a good premise for a story!

Second person viewpoint (I/You) is hard to pull off in a story, for you are telling the reader what they are saying and doing.

It would be a good idea to write more about what people are feeling and thinking instead of only action sentences.

Interesting scene, but somewhat tame. Not that erotic

The comments on this story are interesting... jeesh. I really liked the story and I found it very erotic. I would love my husband and dominate to do this to me one day. Very fun read!