All Comments on 'How a Sex Slave Began Ch. 02'

I think your problem is that your rushing through the story with minimal detail, try and slow it down a bit and and try to use more detail

How can she speak while she has a ball gag in her mouth?

I will not be continuing this story as people do not seem to like it. I am going to be working on a new one and posting that. It will also be about sex slavery, but this one is different, and a lot slower and has more detail! I will post it in roughly 4 days, so please, keep your eyes peeled for that!

I think the story is pretty good. However it has the same error I see over and over and over. Women who are being raped at knife point don't find themselves enjoying it and orgasm. That can eventually work into story a line after they come to be able to internalize they have had their life changed for ever and accept their new life. That does not happen over night and not at knife point. Maybe I should wright my own story and tell it the way it really is.

I love it..made me all juicy and wet..I pinch my tits several time.. I keep squirming my pussy...love it

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You have to continue!

I will continue this story, this time with more detail. People who are hating on it, please stop. I'm doing my best, and if you don't like my writing, go to someone else's. Thank you.

Why do all men in this have horse size dicks. I would understand it if they had a couple of inches more then the average male but 13 inches is insane. Please make the dick size more realistic.