All Comments on 'How My Mall Flashing...'

by MaryJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
ooooh goddd u have me dripping...!!!!

pleeeeeeeese continue this story...!!!...god i wish that was meeeee in the story...i am so hot right now there is a huge wet spot on my chair...don't you think the boys should take her some place else b/4 her hubby gets there...???...maybe let her get dropped off 5 blocks from her house around noon the next day covered in lipstick tattoos...?...something like that...?...thanks sweetie...your first 2 stories were great...but this one....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....luv u, candy - the alleyslut.

arjunx13arjunx13almost 19 years ago
Please dont stop

An excellent story, keep it coming you have a devoted fan waiting for more eagerly, impatiently.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
sexy, very sexy

very good description of the state of mind and the reactions of her body....sensualy felt and transmited....I will love reading more of this.

buttnhosebuttnhosealmost 18 years ago
MORE MORE

JESUS CHRIST< FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!

oriondogoriondogalmost 18 years ago
I'll have try

to make my wife read your stories. Maybe she will feel tha same way I do about them. hot; Hot; HOT.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
please write more

that was so hot, i hope you finish it with the boys...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
thanks

I think this was the best erotic story I have ever read...I am 29yr old and been around the world with Navy, so that says alot...i have forwarded it to over fifteen friends guys and girls and they all loved the hell out of it...we anxiously wait for you to finish this one....lesdadon@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow

oh wow you are the best i've had 3 orgasms and working on the 4th that is one hot story id love to read more by you if you can email them to me thanks

Rico SuaveRico Suaveover 14 years ago
Seriously hot

Very, very hot.

docBluedocBlueabout 14 years ago
what a great story!

it's written with a passion that only comes with vividly seeing that situation in your mind. Now we get to feel that heat as well. Encore!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
great intensity

cant wait for the next part of the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

wow that was hot whens the sequel?

LegittiusLegittiusalmost 14 years ago
:o)

I need to go to the mall more often, I hope you continue this story soon

tp90tp90over 12 years ago
bad girl

loved your story hope it went well with hubby

Mag58Mag58over 12 years ago
Sexy as Hell

you have a great way with words and a captivating storyline 10/10

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Bestest

When are you going to continue ?

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlalmost 11 years ago
Deeeelicious !!!!

Hi MaryJ,

Loved your story "How My Mall Flashing..." - PLEASE make another chapter where the five teenage boys shove their young steel hard cocks deep inside her - easily making her pregnant - married woman pregnant from a teenager's virile cum - a teenage rapist's virile cum !!!! - fucking horny kinky & delicious.

Thank you once again.

Sarah Leather, London England (32yo married fit tanned & toned leather wearing blonde mum who loves teasing & getting fucked by athletic well hung teenage boys!!!!)

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

bottovarnisbottovarnisabout 2 years ago

for sure continue it! Interesting mild bondage (I'm not usually thrilled by that) good pacing, liked the open ended conclusion. Thank you.

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