All Comments on 'How The World Should Be Ran Ch. 01'

"How the World Should be RUN" Please!

...but I have to agree with Anonymous; sloppy grammar can ruin a good story. Do be careful and maybe it would be a good idea to get an assistant editor to read through your work if you're uncertain about anything.

I liked it - 4 *s. Thank you, jinxychan.

Hi...

As a submissive male, I find the beginnings of this story erotic and having real potential... I look forward to reading more installments.

This has ALL the fantasy features I love, though usually I go for the lesbian format!

To be purchased by an Asian mature, and led naked by a leash carrying her stuff. That would be utter bliss.