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it should be Cucky Wimpy. TK U MLJ LV NV

I don't know where you came from?

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he does not let her back in.

end of story!

I had trouble getting through this. You need to proof read, and edit before you post. Way too many errors to be ready to post this story.

I hope this crap "the first and the last" for this new illeterate baboon

nothing else to say about it

Why fill up the site with worthless crap like this? One star.

UTTER GARBAGE, if you're going to post this shit at least have the decency to KNOW the right grammar, spelling and punctuation.

utter garbage, dead wives tell no lies, and his wife doesn't even come to the level of lies

Amazing how when I think that I've read the worst story ever, someone comes and write one even worse...The rating should have negative ratings...Now this one got the podium for the worst story ever...Congratulations...No comments needed for the wife and the husband!

You'll never be much of a writer but this had quite a funny ending.

Congratulations on tossing a thick filet mignon to the crazies!

(However, in the tags, what the fuck is a "cockold" ???)

4* for the comedy

Don't pay any attention to the idiots critizing your story. It was a good one. I only wish it was more detailed. As a connisuer of eating cum filled pussy, I loved it. And that wet pussy belongs to my wife

What is a cockold? A guy whose cock get's old from lack of use because his wife is a stupid whore! ;-)

why is it that most men have small dicks. knew a woman who ex had a monster. but the rich life was more to her liking. ex was just dumb.

Part 2, is that on the way?

after kids her pussy is loose, you could clap your hands in it.

Gay gay gay gay,fuck you little man.

4 inches, really? Such a cliché. Apparently whatever the length it produced some kids--or are they not his either?

Give up writing. That was shear unadulterated crap

first off no man would ever take this BS and secondly no woman would ever tell her husband that!! Dumb story

So what if he has a small dick. He still has his balls. Opps I guess not. Just another pussy guy story. Where's all of the real men?

I'm no writer but it seems that a lot of the writers a using this theme a lot. What's up?!

Who has some notion that all men are idiots. Have I missed anything? You don't need a big cock as an excuse to break your marriage vows, just an absolute disgust for your spouse. And if he's willing to have some guys load on his face then it's no wonder she hates him, he hates himself as well.

Numerous errors made this virtually unreadable.

Where the hell do some of these people get the idea they can write????? 1* cause they have nothing less.

And her excuse basically boiled down to that it was all about her.

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The big problem is that since we know all of his thoughts, his sudden act of going down on her was a complete reversal of what you wrote before that moment. From hiis every thought, his reaction should have been the complete opposite.

He should have threw her under the bus and hired a couple of black or Mexican girls to work her ass over. Kneecap the cheating bitch and break her arms and take a baseball bat and beat the dog shit out of her nasty cunt.

Sorry but your story fails. I'm not bashing it because it's a Cheating Wife story, or a Cuck Story, I'm criticizing it because it's lacking. There was no real attempt at character development, we have no idea who these people are, what their relationship is like, the closest you brought us to that was the opening dialogue but then you left it there. Then you moved into the Cheating Wife without any build up, there was no tension, no temptation, nothing to bring the reader in support of the wife, her fight for integrity in the face of an uncaring husband who takes her for granted. Finally you jump to the Size Queen with no emphasis on her dissatisfaction, or the temptation of greener pastures, hearing stories of magnificent sexual escapades from her closest friends, nothing like that. So ok, maybe this is a Porn or Stroke story but no, it's not even that. There is no detail into the sexual activity of the partners, whoever they are, no visuals, to thrilling dialogue between partners, no real description of anything sexual or provocative.

Try again but next time tell a story, build some tension, develop characters, or at least be graphically depict ive of something erotic.

Just can't see a real guy writing something so stupid......BALLS CHECK.

Man, there is plenty of trash on this site, but this has to go into the HOF of bad erotica. That alone is enough to add it to my favorites.

For having him describe dried cum on his face in the first paragraph. Saved reading on. Thanks.

not worth the effort of writing!

Find something else to do as a hobby. Swim with sharks or something.

Fat nasty wife that doesn't want to give the breadwinner any sex while he provides a home, a van and and money. He is a loving husband. She goes next door for sex with unknown person while denying it to poor hubby. There is zero value to the fat ungrateful wife. Story sucked!

Please don't post any more stories until you can at least make them plausible.

Goddam it - who let the sewer caps off and these putrid asshole manifest into the lit world. Fucking assholes!

Why don't you eat your mother's asshole, gk6h?? after she's had diarhea, of course

gk6h... invest your time in getting a life.

When you leave those acidic comments you feed the authors need to be criticized. Closet masocist maybe. So, If you don't like the story or the premise just give it a one and move on. I seldom read any story below a 3 unless it's from a favored author.

While I prefer happy cucks and their wives, this couple may be on their way to that fun life. Some editing would make it an easier read.

Your prose reads like it is. That's some very bad writing man, the word crap springs to mind very easily. If you fancy yourself as a writer then you have a lot learn about everything. Sorry I can't be more positive.

Regardless of any deficiencies, I thought it was erotic in a cucold way, and funny. Bravo.

A guy in the restaurant business once told me that some people simply have a taste for shit. Any effort at making a great meal is a waste of time on those customers. Apparently true on Literotica as well. This is real crap. Enjoy your fans.

She would be my ex... no question about it...

Would have told her, you hit the door before I throw you through it.

This is scored 2.5 times above what it should be.

Wow another one that makes Covid 19 seem fun. Stupid. Juvenile. Pathetic and another one that needs to be quarantined. Cuck a Doodle Do

The thought of a woman peeling off her smelly, sticky underwear and putting my face in it makes me shudder. I was hoping he was going to wake up on the couch and say it was just a nightmare. Ok, he was genetically short changed. Not much he can do about that. Funny, he was good enough when she married him.

Fuck - a secret cuck story - why do they do this?

Don't write any more of this stupid stuff unless you give the guy some balls

No, not for me. Should have known better from low story count

There are authors and stories that keep brining readers to Literotica. This is neither.

do the site a favor.. never write anything again