All Comments on 'Humiliating Nightmare Ch. 01'

Good start, very revealing and honest.

Why give two important characters the same name, then spend the rest of the story having to explain which one it is?

It can't be easy to be so open and forthright - well done.

You're kidding, right? You are creating the story, you can name the characters anything you want... and you give two of them the same name? I'm guessing you were high when you wrote this?

Great story, by the way. Just a really dumb decision to build in confusion to your story for no reason at all.

I write for a living as a journalist and I read a lot of stories here that are not so much obscene but the writers lack of skill is the real obscenity. You are far from that. You have great idea and concept and you don't drag it through poor grammar and events that even our minds don't dwell on when we jack off because they are never gonna happen. Your story here is possible..that's how good stories go

Vacum up the nectar

Im confused was this supposed to be a true story? What happened was only humiliating because you made it so from your feelings. Im a pretty attractive girl, like an irl Lisa, and "one pump chump" stuff has happened to me soooo many times including from stud guys like Paul. Guys are all talk about their sexual prowess, when it comes down to it theyre shy.

So yea if this really happened, no need to be embarrassed, sounds pretty hot!

Could you write one that is REALLY humiliating? Like you have to cum in front of the whole school but it turns you on so you shoot a lot of cum. And have Lisa humiliated as well ;) thx