All Comments on 'Husband's Dream'

by IrnWlf

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WoodyKCWoodyKCover 9 years ago
another pathetic weak male

Need a new category for pathetic losers who share their wife. Why are you married? Enjoy being weak then start single and stop wasting time. Maybe anon can complain about me again chicken crap is all over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Real loser is this pathetic loser.

Anyone of the myriad of sorry excuse of human beings who write and post these loser articles are nothing short of cesspool dwellers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Idea?

Instead of WACC how about

PLWACC for Pathetic Loser Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold.

I think it fits this kind of shit nicely

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
CUCKOLD TO-DO CLEANUP

He should have been nice cuckold husband and do CLEANUP on both hole before he fucked her, then he could fuck her and do his own CLEANUP YUM YUM

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hubby Emerged from the Closet

Seems about right.Dont you think? This story is so cliche its laughable.Nice try No vote like the moron before me because scores dont mean anything

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
JUST A DREAM---JUST A DREAM

but nightmares follow dreams, TK U MLJ LV NV

looking4itlooking4itover 9 years ago

Ah, frigid wife, rape, large dicks and incest. What more could you have packed into a pathetic tale? Oh yeah, a title that has almost nothing to do with the story and no idea if the "suggestion" changes their sex life. Maybe he learned that if his wife gives him the cold shoulder he can offer his 18 yo daughter a glass of Schnapps and get lucky there. If this is the author's dream then I truly feel sorry for his wife and daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot and should have cleaned her up before taking the daughter!

Love wife gets fucked by 2...nice twist on the daughter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Now a closet chuck

For those who like this crap good luck, is incest next. Wife is double team I hope the cocks have no diseases . Just a sick story .

honeylicker1124honeylicker1124over 9 years ago
Great story despite the brainless anonymous morons'....

comments.

Hey, IT'S A STORY! IT'S FANTASY!

Ok, good writing, and no mistakes I can remember. This could develop into an interesting dual or triple line, since hubby is supposed to be "gone" He comes back the next day, to find a very guilty looking wife who won't say what's bothering her, and he keeps nagging Kat until he finally shows her the video several days later. Then there is the daughter that confronts her mom about her adultery while her dad is away, and the conflict that brings. Then there is the father telling Casey what he saw, and using it against her. Please continue on. 5 *'s

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Daughter?

The who daughter part made took this from a cuckold tale to something ...else. Not sure why that part was added as it crossed categories that shouldn't and it will certainly turn off a large number of readers that may have liked it otherwise.

satinlvr_mwfsatinlvr_mwfover 9 years ago
Nice little story

The daughter is a nice touch for a follow up, maybe. The chance meeting was a bit contrived though. Keep writing and I'd love to see a chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So he fucks the daughter?

That should turn on the trolls.

P.S never met a Kat that wasn't a total fucking whore. must be in the name.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
honeylicker

Go fuck yourself. You're a prime example of a fucking troll. The anonymous comments are about the story and the character. You on the other hand can't resist bashing others for having an opposing opinion. Who is the fucking troll here asshole. Look in the mirror and you will see him. Of course you would give a story like this five stars, all the cuckie stories get the same rating from you. We all know you're a cuckie who gets off watching his wife get fucked by a better man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Gave it a 1 to help offset the assholes

who give cuckhold stories 5 stars. Erotic my ass. Isn't this fun. A good example why scores in loving wives are meaningless and as worthless as the scum authors that write these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
re: bonnietaylor

Better to be an asshole than a cunt who offsets scores. What's that make you?

impo_60impo_60over 9 years ago
This story had legs to walk...but...

This story had legs to walk...but the writer choose the bad choices: she cheating, he letting all happen, and than the daughter watching her mother to whore herself...What kind of father and mother are these? This is a sordid story...Less than 1*...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
re: gave it a 5 to help offset

Asshole: noun, cretin who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion.

<P>

Of course, that's an asumption on bonnietaylor2's part because this bozo never said anything about the story. Odd, though. The people it blasts comment on the story while it comments on them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Does anybody want to be this guy?

I sure the fuck wouldn't act like this, yikes, what a fucked up bunch of people.

Jedd11Jedd11over 9 years ago
Arguments

What's being lost in all the back and forth banter about your story is what happens next? You said it's another story, so I would like to hear it. Not generally a fan of cuck stories; I read them in hopes of BTB. But if you continue and include the daughter, I could overlook it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not Sure...

I do wonder would a husband hide in a wardrobe and watch his wife fuck another man while his teenage daughter was in the house...mmmm

Not sure if this is viable.

Flirting is one thing taking another man back to your family home and fuck on marital bed is another !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OMG

Some actually thought this was a five star story. That's an insult to the erotic authors of this category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
1*

Yada,yada,yada.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I know this is fiction but this is sick. Why include a child in this story, it's not right. Hubby should have popes put during the DP and announced that he wants a divorce from his cheating slut of a wife. Chapter 2 would be nice to cover the aftermath of this night with explanation to hubby child and wife the parents are discussting, mom for being a pig and hubby allowing her drunk slut ass to act that way with two guys. And no she can't use being drunk as an excuse because she set out to cheat

GoldenCojonesGoldenCojonesover 9 years ago
Pretty good stroke story

This is a pretty good stroke story. I would have liked more character development but still pretty good. Ignore the trolls and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
emotionally weak people cut themselves too... is that sexy?

snooze...

OOAAOOAAover 9 years ago
HOOOOOOOTTTTTT

Great story!!!!!! Congrats!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Typical wimp/slut bullshit.

Dry and boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Incredibly hot

And yes, it calls out for a sequel!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 9 years ago
Usual crap. Wife loses her passion

But somehow decides to have an affair with not one but two guys and the 18 yr old, instead of being angry at her mother for cheating joins in.

Are you fucking with us? No, really, I want to know if this is a commentary on the idiocy of the majority of stories here or if you figured that betrayal, incest and possible impregnation (which at 40 yrs old stands a high risk of Down's Syndrome) is actually erotic.

erosguyerosguyover 9 years ago
anon loser

Get a life, you sad fuck. No one gives a shit about your opinions of other people and posting them here just highlights your mental instability. Normal people just leave people who do things they don't like alone. They don't trawl message boards posting hate filled comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
re:erosguy-anon loser

Question: If you don't care what the opinions of anons are why are you reading their comments? Dwell on that for a while, before you open your filthy mouth.

As for the story, stupid and non-erotic. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Too cliche' to be good writing, and too disgusting to be interesting.

I guess in chapter two will get the incest, gang banging, and mother and daughter sharing their new pregnancy experience. All that is missing is the trailer, you've provided the trash.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
We've been there, done that......

3,422 times in LW. So, what's new?

Not you!

HoppydoodleHoppydoodleover 9 years ago
One star because I cannot give it a zero

Willing cuckolds are mentally ill.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Crap

Sorry but this one was a stinker. I love a good cheating wife story but this just was too unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hit the Road

The scumbag husband is a dirt-bag in this piece. He allowed his semi-conscious, obviously drunk-out-of-her-mind wife, to be date-raped by two predators.

The daughter is no better either; wtf is wrong with this writer's head?

Then the writer has this pervert husband rape his wife as well.

This is not sexy, it's disturbed.

GoodhueGoodhueabout 9 years ago
Give Me a Break!

Another fuckin' loser husband and slut wife! No wonder the divorce rate is so high! Hubby must be a real wimp if the wife can go months without sex,but hook up with the 1st guy who hits on her,and then double-bang him with his friend in her own bed. Do people like this really exist?! I certainly hope not!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Managed

You managed some nasty carp here. Glad you mentioned a dozen times that your daughter, you were watching while she watchef your whore wife, was eighteen. You are an ass.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
STUPID SISSY HUSBAND

Why hide? Have some fun and walk in on them fucking and scare the fuck out of them

..dumb ass spoiled everything by hiding

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

fuck up

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Stupid and ugly. If this is what it takes to get you excited, you've got real mental issues and need to get help. Any husband this pathetic needs to be culled from The Herd.

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