All Comments on 'Hyperspermia Pt. 01 Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Better than Chapter 1

Wow, this chapter is better than chapter 1 was. I would love to have a doctor like Stacy. Now I can't wait to find out what her hypothesis is, and how she "treats" Stanley's condition! Does he need regular treatments, and what will Stacy's husband think of it? How about Stanley's dad? What will his reaction be to the Dr.'s findings, and treatment for Stanley's condition?

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Stacy is a cheating slut!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A real doctor would insist on being called "Dr. Williams", not "Mrs. Williams" or "Stacy". Of course, a real doctor would also stay clothed, explain herself before performing an experiment, have her patient masturbate himself rather than give him a blow job, and measure the volume of semen by catching it in a measuring cup rather than by seeing how much she can swallow. Perhaps "Dr. Williams" is not appropriate because she's not really a doctor? ... or should I check my brain at the door because this is erotica, and unprofessionalism is hotter? Yeah, I should probably do that.

GiovanniBruscatoGiovanniBruscatoover 1 year ago

Fun! Covering all the erotica tropes, aren't you? Nice! Keep up the good work.

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Work has been crazy busy and I have had some family issues that are taking up a lot of time. I am still writing and have active drafts for all 3 of my series in motion. I appreciate your patience.

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