All Comments on 'Hypno-Video Ch. 01'

I hope to read what happens to him and her in the morning, and if she leaves her husband for the threesome love affair. thanks for the very good and well writen story....Rich

Completely lost me when you started talking about the anti-anal people reading your story. Way to rip me out of your fantasy and remind me that I'm reading a story.

Well written and I loved the line about anal-negative commenters. Made me laugh and addressed a valid point about people griping about stories that don't fit their own ideas.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Wow great story!

I really need to read chapter 2

I really love your the concepts and characters in this story so far. I trust that you're setting yourself up for at least one if not two or more stories, all of which I'm really looking forward to reading. Keep it up and I love the twists so far. Joe

I'm likeing how you started this story. hope to see more really soon.

This composition was somehow...perfect. High praise from a man who has on some sites made reputation for "hating everything". Still, all the right elements were there: Control, Willingness, Consideration for the subject, a touch of "White Knight" syndrome...even true love. Also though, humor...a trait sorely lacking in this genre to my opinion. So, thank you for a wonderful entertainment, from the Man Who Hates Everything.

totally ruined it for me when you broke the fourth wall and acknowledged literotica. Otherwise found it arousing, with the exception of the husband thinking too hard about rape or being mad for putting his wife on the spot. Good effort though.

Thanks! Keep writing

The idea for this story is very intriguing. This might have sparked a hypnosis epidemic for both men and women.

I loved this story and can't wait to see what happens next.