All Comments on 'I Do ... Both Mother & Daughter'

Just another "wham-bam" story. No build up, needs more description. Too fast, too crude.

Though this author provides good stories this one suffers from some distractions which affect quality. Things like "Oooohhhhhh," "Ahhhhhhhhh," "OOhhhh," and "word. . . word" make reading at times dificult and confusing. It would help readers to remove these.

Is it Mandy or Millie. Get a proofreader.

Good Story - Wegman's IS a great place to pick up women I will admit. Nice use of real world in the story...it makes is more believable. I would recommend asking for a proof reader. I've started using one and it helps a lot.

When I read Rochester I was wood, when I read Red Wings I was iron great job keep emailing cumming.

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