All Comments on 'I Drink Every Drop You Give Me'

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Katie_CumsKatie_Cumsabout 9 years agoAuthor
My first story...what do you think?

Hi everyone, I've been reading stories here for years, and finally got the nerve to submit one of my own. Would love to hear your thoughts and feedback.

This story is based on a fantasy of mine and while I haven't been able to make it a reality yet, I do own a dress exactly like the one in the story.

Also, as you will note at the end of the story, the party's not over. I've definitely got some fun ideas about what might happen later in the evening. ;)

- Katie

rombo034rombo034about 9 years ago

..so I would love to read how the party develops!

The start has been really good in my eyes ;-)

Short, fast, but effective.

Red48beardRed48beardabout 9 years ago
like this initial offering

very nice job

good tease

excellent resolution

lingering images

promise of more

well done

chytownchytownabout 9 years ago
Nice Read***

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Beautiful

Amazing details; hope he can satisfy you the same in the upcoming story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Keep Writing

Well written, right length (as was his cock) You've obviously done that sort of thing. I'll look forward to your next story (not to long I hope)

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