All Comments on 'I Got Myself a Cum Slut Pt. 01'

Nice starter for ten.

More in the same vein will go down well....lol

You need a different editor.

A good first story, I would suggest that your next chapter be longer. with more details

of what these guy look like, both physically and cock wise. More details to what both or feeling while they are playing.

I am new to story writing and hope to get better, i have the 2nd part already to go and plan on a few more depending on how the story unfolds.

Nothing wrong with the editing. Good opening story, well written and very enjoyable. Good to see some writing from GB. Keep up the good work.

Menopause took my wife and my sex life away. We have both felt robbed, her by nature, me feeling as though both her and nature both got one over on me. I tried to get her to at least suck my cock so we could both be involved, but she didn't have the interest for even that anymore. My eureka moment came when I was perusing through a story and it mentioned sex ads on craigslist. I'd never heard of such a thing!

Over the next few months I read the ads every day but fear of disease and no one that really sounded right caught my eye. Until one day I read one that grabbed my attention. The ad read thusly. "Married 48 year old cocksucker looking for a ONE feeder, no reciprocation. Fully submissive, I'm willing perform orally (no anal or kissing) as much as needed. I'm willing to travel from XXXX to XXXX to service one man and do what I'm told."

That caught my attention. Living out in the country, most of the ads were by people living in the cities wanting to hook up with other people close by. This guy was within no more than 4 miles from me. I wracked my brain trying to figure out who it might be. Finally, not able to stand it, I sent a message and I received a reply within a few minutes. As a 58 year old retiree I am home all day almost every day. My wife at 52 would continue to teach for another 15 years. Who ever was on line messaging me back was also home during the day.

We met up at a local Café. I'd never had anything to do with another man sexually and whoever it was swore he hadn't either. I knew him by what he wore the instant I entered the Café by what he said he'd wear. It was Thomas, who lived on the end of my road. His wife and my wife worked together in the high school! Awkward at first, we decided to go back to my house and talk it over more to see if it truly was something we were still both interested in or whether it would be too 'weird'.

Thomas had done odd jobs for me off and on over the years. Where I am 6'3" and 200lbs, Thomas is 5'6" and 240lbs. A truly nice guy, he had the same problem as me, a wife who either wouldn't or couldn't perform sexually. Although I gave him an out and said he might be comfortable looking elsewhere, he was of the opinion I knew, so why should anyone else? He claimed he wasn't gay in the least, women turned him on more than anything but a photo of a hard cock, which made his mouth water. I asked him one last time if he wanted out and he swore he really wanted to do it.

My issue was that he not be sexually active with anyone else. He agreed, if I could perform sexually, he had reason to look elsewhere. All he wanted was to feel and taste a cock in his mouth, along with wanting to make it cum on his tongue where he could taste it. Not knowing what else to do, I stood and moved to stand in front of where he sat and pulled my zipper down an surprisingly, a rock hard cock! 7" long and thick with an even bigger head on it, it looked like an arm with a huge fist on the end!

Thomas actually salivated looking at it and the moment I shot off into his mouth, I knew he was my guy, the one to take care of me. He rolled my softening cock in his mouth and I asked him to not swallow and keep the cum in his mouth. He agreed and so I told him to stand and jack off in front of me. Pulling out a freaking hog, 8 or 9 inches long at least, he was circumcised to my uncut state, he began to tug on it vigorously! Not more than 10 strokes into it, he shot off onto my hardwood floor. It wasn't until his libido flagged that I let him swallow my sperm, I wanted him to not be horny when he tasted that sperm sliding down his throat.

Going in to the bathroom, I washed my cock and returned just to find Thomas still on his knees, awaiting my orders. I made him stand in front of me so I could examine his cock, so much the same as my own, yet nothing was the same. Although he had just orgasmed, I told him to jack to orgasm again, but that time with my cock in his mouth yet again. I felt him begin to cum after only a few minutes and that it here, I have to go to bed and will finish this in the morning.

I wish I was that man servicing him. I would love to meet a dominate male that would take control of me

This is the first time I've seen a story written from a dominant point of view. I really enjoyed it. But even as a dominant partner one can still suck some cock.....

Which is exactly what I'd do...

... well-written, with much hotness. 5 stars.

Paul is one lucky cocksucker and I can't wait to read more chapters about these two men.