All Comments on 'Identity Crisis 05'

I am enjoying the episodes of Identity Crisis and look forward to more.

Take as long as you need to, just don't stop writing! I love where this story is going! Don't be afraid to take a little longer to release larger chapters if you want (I know I'd prefer slightly longer chapters)!

My intention was to create suspense, not because it was half done. I'm at chapter 7 now and my editor is editing chapter 6. Sorry for the wait, my editor and I were really busy.

Not to be rude BabyDreamer, because I love the plot, but you've given us 5 chapters of minimal build up....the suspense has been there for a couple chapters now. I just hope in future submissions you write the stories to be at least two pages....there's no reason you can't combine them. Also, please stop calling the character Victor, in fem attire he should be called Victoria

Cocklover31 was right.

I shall just give this short trashy submission a 1*

to be honest, at the first chapters, someone commented says that he/she like short chapters, and it's easier to read... Guess it's really hard to please everyone.. =(

At least she is writing something and not let the story stop. She is creative and I applaud her for that. This plot is so excellent that everyone just can't stop. But you shouldn't pause there. Do write a little longer but just keep going!

xoxo

Heidi

Just submitted chapter 6, both me and my editor are really busy, and since longer chapters are expected, I've made chapter 6 a little longer as well.

This is like the Half-Life of erotic fiction, SO GOOD and I WANT MORE

Please don't stop writing!