Swipe to see who's online now!
- NonConsent/Reluctance
- If
- Comments
All Comments on 'If'
by IronKitten
Sort by:
- 3 Comments
Anonymousover 16 years agoGood story but needs editing
I would have like the story more but all the grammatical/spelling errors detracted from it.
SexxxyCuriosityover 15 years agoI like it - but please get an editor.
Great story, but please use the volunteer editing program. There were so many grammatical errors, it was distracting and made it hard to enjoy what would have otherwise been fabulous writing.
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
IronKitten@IronKitten1 Followers
Swipe to see more cams!
SIMILAR Stories
Taken at the Beach
4.49
135
12
Olivia's Bad Choice
4.28
20
4
Taking Anna
4.3
53
5
A Spectral Visit
4.65
38
4
Imanna's Crowded Train
More Stories4.1
69
1
