All Comments on 'If the Bed's a Rockin''

very good story hope you will continue their story.

Jane. Hope the person you wrote it for enjoys it. I know I sure did. It was fun working on it with you, too. :) We've got to do another sometime!

You should continue on this story! I want to know if there is a 'second' time for them and what happens during the rest of the weekend of them together!

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Super turn-on! This is being picky, but I thought you had both of them a little too "experienced". Teen girls don't break up and miss the sex so badly they're horny two weeks later, and he thinking her pussy was "the best he ever tasted"-(compared to what?) are examples. But its so hot I gave you 100 anyway!

So hot Jane, thank you...

Great story and alas. you got yours submitted before mine! lol wonderful!!!!

The story has feelings that only a person that did the dance could write. Plainly_Jane, your story is not like your (pen) name but it is plainly_GOOD!. hugs.dan

The story has feelings that only a person that did the dance could write. Plainly_Jane, your story is not like your (pen) name but it is plainly_GOOD!. hugs.dan

Jane,

You have a great sense of humor, and that made this story especially enjoyable. “This is what's up, and it ain't a carrot” was such a fantastic line. It was funny and corny and perfect. The descriptive details were also great, especially for a shorter piece. You're one of my faves; keep up the great work!

Mused

this was awesome The best sorry I ever read!

Lets face it most of the stories here aren't that great. But yours was well written. Not only that but it was nice to clean out my head since the last story i read on here was about rape and incest. I'm sure that was a good story but the feelings I pick up afterwards was rough on me. I like this and the silly ending was nice too. Great Job!

Ex-ce-lente!

When I was a young fella there was a fairly explicit rear window or bumper bar sticker which went:-

"Don't bother knocking if this car's a rocking"

You did take me back and I wish I had enjoyed your story a long time ago.

No, no, no!! You can't end it there, it's just getting really good, dammit!!

Man, that was awesome! I always wanted my mom to marry some guy with hot daughters, hehehe. Hell, she got married enough times, lol! Always nothing or boys:( boo!

You should write another chapter or two!! Thanks :)