All Comments on 'I'll Drop My Panties for U'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Extend

How about a second chapter to complete this story as told so far.

You obviously have created openings several more chapters.

I very much look forward to reading more of you writings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
careful with point of view

interesting start, but the random shifts from first to second person were really distracting. curious to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
she already remove panties

thought she had taken them off in bathroom & was holding them when he opened the door

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 10 years ago
GOOD STORY

You could take this in many directions, but you do need to watch tense and proof-read better. This is the second one of your stories I've read today so you can see that I enjoy your writing. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
150 million?

Careful please. Nice context and scenario for the story.

two quibbles: She dropped her panties on the floor, but when she took off her dress she had on matching panties and bra?

And, as good a fundraiser as Tom is, he did NOT get a $150 million campaign gift.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
True life

So the whores are democrats. Makes sense. One has to be named Pelosi.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So interesting 26thNC thinks all whores are Democrats given the Cheater In Chief

I guess he only finds cheating bad when women do it.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1almost 5 years ago
150 million

Absurd

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