by luvz2x
This fucking sizzles! Would love to go on a little camping trip, help me raise my tent pole. Hope you write some more soon.
GREAT STORY. IMPERIAL BEACH. DO HOPE THERE ARE MORE STORIES
TO COME. THIS HAS TO BE A MASTER PEACE OF A STORY.
DO KEEP WRITING MORE.
The writing on this is incredible. Descriptive, imaginative, playful, it tells a fun story in a high-voltage style. I hope you continue to write; you are really good!
Excellent story, thanks for the thrill. I thought maybe Jeff would have been forced to watch...