by luvz2x
Excellent story, thanks for the thrill. I thought maybe Jeff would have been forced to watch...
The writing on this is incredible. Descriptive, imaginative, playful, it tells a fun story in a high-voltage style. I hope you continue to write; you are really good!
GREAT STORY. IMPERIAL BEACH. DO HOPE THERE ARE MORE STORIES
TO COME. THIS HAS TO BE A MASTER PEACE OF A STORY.
DO KEEP WRITING MORE.
This fucking sizzles! Would love to go on a little camping trip, help me raise my tent pole. Hope you write some more soon.