All Comments on 'In a Bottle... Ch. 04'
by Zeban
- 14 Comments
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThis is a fun story. The characters are a little shallow but the flow is good and the
Imagery is clear. I really wish there was more toreador. Unfinished stories leave a hole.
But thanks for this part at least.
C_frommnover 11 years agoNow we need for Brock and Heather to be Exposed and to have Alan and the Ladies to deal with the two of them.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoIt seems greedy Broktic is looking to exploit weaknesses and that has peaked my interest. I hope you resolve your problems and can find the time to finish the story.
NightGhoulover 12 years agoI've never rated or commented on anyone before, but if this helps get the next chapter faster ok. love the subject matter.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI love all in the set so far keep going I think its time he finds that he already owns some other containers of jeinis. To help him with the trouble coming. But that's just my idea you sertantly don't need any help you are an awsome. Writer
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis is by far the best stories I have read so far on literotica. I have been coming on for three years and first saw your stories today and wasn't able to stop reading. Absolutely FANTASTIC! Bring the next one out as SOON as possible, do you have a date for it yet?
Anonymousover 12 years agoYour writing is good. The story is good. I think what alot of people are bothered with is the time. It's been a year since the first two parts and 8 months since the last chapter. I like the story but was worried it was never gonna get finished.
Loxxyover 12 years agoYour writing isn't mediocre. Don't take 4 stars in a bad way!
Really Like your story
Zebanover 12 years agoAuthorI would love to write more, but I have trouble getting motivated. Keep commenting and I will have that much more reason to get a jump on the next story arc. When I get voted 4 stars by 25% of my readers and nobody bothers to tell me why, I assume my writing is mediocre and that only a few people are actually looking forward to the next chapter. Then I lose interest for a month until I get the itch to write again. Feedback is why I write guys, good or bad! Please comment if you want more!
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