All Comments on 'In Her Garden'

It was very moveing. I liked the story and the way it progressed. Although I do find it odd that you didn't put it in Romance. Anyway thankyou.

I love reading about a man and his wife loving each other, and having sex between each other with out outsiders corrupting their marriage. I wonder what it would feel like to lay her sexy and soft naked body on the soft loose warm earth, and pound her ass into the ground by fucking her hard and deep. With her pussy dripping her womanly juice and his manly spunk flowing from her pussy, they would make mud between her legs, and her ass crack would have mother earth impacted in it. I love to smell freshly turned earth and freshly fucked pussy. Damn, that's a sexy visual.Thanks for the good Loving wives story .........Rich

It is so rare on lit where most of the writers and readers get off on wanking their drippy little two inch pee pee's while they read about some wimpy husband and his whore wife fucking half the neighborhood and all his coworkers and their animals that bite and maul the wimp so they can get their daily dose of humility. Well not me. I like your stuff and will read you from now on

or was it Romance? Anyway it was enjoyable and very well written. Thanks!

The periodic change from third to first person narrative was annoying and distracting. It detracted from an otherwise good story. You could benefit from a good editing.

Whenever I read a tale of a loving husband and wife together in bliss it just warms the cockles of my heart.

Another loving wife and husband story. Can't have too many.