by LiterScotican
...that the flatmate turned out to be a guy - the tone in the first couple of paragraphs seemed to indicate a woman.
Other than that, let's see how Ch. 2 turns out.
Wonderful More, please! (There's something about the mental image of a knight in shining armor saving the maiden who's been overcome by her own frigging ...)
What an excellent start to a story. I am intrigued and look forward to finding out what has been going on - you leave various things hanging. Definitely needs Ch. 02