All Comments on 'In Her Room, Afterwards Ch. 01'

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DrmaxcDrmaxcover 13 years ago
Original

What an excellent start to a story. I am intrigued and look forward to finding out what has been going on - you leave various things hanging. Definitely needs Ch. 02

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Damn lol

I thot the roomie was also a girl!

lol

humminbeanhumminbeanover 13 years ago
Off to a thundering start

Wonderful More, please! (There's something about the mental image of a knight in shining armor saving the maiden who's been overcome by her own frigging ...)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

Hope there's more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Slight Disappointment...

...that the flatmate turned out to be a guy - the tone in the first couple of paragraphs seemed to indicate a woman.

Other than that, let's see how Ch. 2 turns out.

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